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Responding to First Year Student Writing
These guidelines are designed to help you save time while maintaining
fair, consistent grading combined with useful feedback for improving writing.
- Use a rubric. It helps you provide quick feedback in many areas
so that you can save your writing to respond to the students work.
It also assures every student receives feedback about the same features
of their writing.
- Use a pencil. Especially if youre tired. You can erase
comments you think better of in the morning.
- Dont copy edit. Research shows that correcting students
grammatical and correctness errors doesnt improve their writing.
Correcting error-riddled writing takes up your time, overwhelms (and
discourages) students, and actually makes them read fewer of your comments.
And it makes students lazy, because we cant catch all of their
(or our own) typos and errorsmake them responsible for this. Try
instead one of these strategies: a) give students 20 minutes in class
to proof paperswith their handbooks, on the day the papers are
due. Ask them to make any corrections neatly in pen and let them ask
you and their peers questions during this time. Good discussions often
ensue. b) Offer them the opportunity to side-shadow before they turn
in a paperthat is, to ask you questions about their choices on
the draft (or in the draft). c) When responding papers, concentrate
on those errors that interfere with meaningthe ones that confuse
you as a reader. d) If there are many errors, and they interfere with
your ability to interact with the text, try editing a paragraph and
then work with the student to edit the others. e) If you have to go
to a handbook to see if its an error, youre being nit-picky
and not helpful.
- Use marginal comments as dialogue. Feel free to ask legitimate
questions. Praise items that are good or improved, even if not perfect.
Comments such as, "This is a strong piece of evidence and a good
place for it in your argument. You need to paraphrase more carefully
though, or put quotes around phrases and ideas that are not yours. Lets
talk about how to do this more effectively" open a dialogue where
an accusation of plagiarism closes down discussion. Most first
year students have difficulty using sourcescomment on it, help
them with it.
- Use a top-down response strategy: COEEcontent, organization,
expression, editing. Focus feedback on higher level issues. It is
not useful to discuss editing problems with a student whose paper has
no focus or relevant research. Comments on content and organization
precede comments on expression and editing.
- In end comments, begin with something you can honestly praise.
Try to enjoy student writingeven if you can only praise a good
idea gone very, very bad. Use a full sentence of praiseno buts,
howevers, or althoughs.
- Choose one or two issues to comment on. More than that is too
much for you and your students. Try to follow up in the next paper or
draft, noting improvement if it is there.
- Close by offering a specific strategy for revision, a source to
explore, or an idea to try in future projects. This strategy makes
your response part of a process rather than a post-mortem.
- Dont spend time justifying a grade. Your rubric and evaluation
criteria should help students see where their work falls and why. Encourage
them to come to you with questions or concerns about gradesbut
justifying a grade is time-consuming for you and not helpful in improving
student writingfocus instead on rhetorical issueshow the
choices that inform the document meet the needs of its audience.
- Try to offer all students the same level of response. It is
easy to give struggling students more of your time than strong students.
Try to challenge your strong students move to the next level, too. "Good
job" doesnt tell even talented novice writers what theyve
done welland they often dont know. (And long comments really
overwhelm weak students.) Try 35-50 words per student and make yourself
stop.
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